There are quite a few

  Forum Editor 22:19 30 Jul 2003

spelling errors in the site text, and many omissions of punctuation - if you have time it might be an idea to run a spelling and grammar checker on the text.

Otherwise, it's a vast improvement on the first draft that you showed us a while back, and it's obvious that you've worked hard - well done.

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