Proof reading and feedback

  smudge101 23:08 05 Jun 2004

Would somebody mind doing a bit of proofreading on my site and give me a bit of feedback. I know it has not got fancy navigation or anything and will need some developing.
Any feedback would be welcome.
The site is click here
Thanks in advance

  Forum Editor 00:25 06 Jun 2004

1. 'awesome' is spelt like that.

2. "if the host is on broadband their address will always be the same" isn't necessarily correct. All IP addresses are dynamically assigned for each session - whether for broadband connections or not. In saying that I'm assuming that broadband users don't leave their connection running permanently (not a wise thing to do).

3. 'Shear playability' should be sheer playability.

4. Recieved should be received

5. I assume the settings page will eventually have content.

  smudge101 00:45 06 Jun 2004

Thanks FE

Just the kind off comments I needed, I take your point about Broadband but most Broadband connections that I have come across have a static IP address. I have commented that this may not be the case though, thanks.
The settings page will have content, I am just deciding on a balance between simplicity and usefulness.
I have corrected the spilling mistookes, these are always a pain to spot!

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