Hi Geoff. Just a bit of tweaking needed now; the devil's in the details. Watch your image alt tags - they are defaults at the moment, so your viewers will see "abbie01 copy02" and things like that popping up.
Is the text maybe a bit too small? I could just about read it comfortably, but not everyone will find it okay. As I'm sure you know, accessibility is important. So too, is punctuation; pretty okay but just a few missing or misplaced commas. Just little things like that.
I like all the descriptive text; it gives a real feel for what the site is all about.