It would have a good deal more impact if perhaps there was a bit more content. I personally find the way that you've centred all the text a bit distracting, and colouring text blue on a website always tends to make people expect a hyperlink.
If you are going to experiment with Dreamweaver try using tables - you might find the results interesting. Tables are a web-designer's friend.
There's nothing wrong with your site - it's just that it has a whole range of possibilities, and it might be fun to explore some of them.
thanks for the comments and you are correct I had the site on before shall take comments on board but having looked at dreamweaver think it could be a little while before I,ll able to be able to get something near what I want but will stick with it.
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